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A poem for Lynne
PostPosted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 10:42 am Reply with quote
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My Angel

I can't explain the feeling
My head was in a whirl,
I brought a life into this world
A bouncing baby girl.

I hoped she'd call me Nana,
I hoped I'd see her grow,
But life has many twists and turns
How was I to know?

I pray to God to give you strength
To help you find your way,
That one day you will understand
The things that I did say.

You have chosen to exclude me
To leave me out once more,
But my love for you will never die
Nor that baby that I adore.

You can't take away my memories
That I keep inside of me,
The birth of my sweet angel
Nana; I'll always be.

written for Lynne by Mary

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 1:29 pm Reply with quote
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Thank you Mary. You nailed it right on the head. I'm telling you again, you are a natural talent and need to get your poetry published.

Thank you for so eloquently saying the words that I feel in my heart. You are such a beautiful person!

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Thank You. for believing in me it means so much to me..I started writing it after I talked to you on the phone, once I started it just kept flowing...just wanted to say what I knew was in your heart...hugsss Mary

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very nice poem for Lynne

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Mary, You write very well. I agree with Lynne- publish them.

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Awesome poem Mary, your very talented too and that was so sweet of you to write it for Lynne, a very nice gift!!

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Thanks Sam, I love to write, it's one way I get my feelings out...Mary

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great job

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